Project #1: A Simple Story

Bike B
http://vimeo.com/28794847

Charles H
http://vimeo.com/28797296

Christina J
http://vimeo.com/28794919

David S
http://vimeo.com/28794957

Jack L
http://vimeo.com/28797586

Morgan S
http://vimeo.com/28797323

Nora G
http://vimeo.com/28797397

Olivia R
http://vimeo.com/28797560

Robert B
http://vimeo.com/28797421

Ross G
http://vimeo.com/28797469

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4 comments:

  1. DSaundersSeptember 15, 2011 at 10:47 AM

    Ross G: Really like the audio/visual sync. Images and videos are certainly interesting to watch. One note: consider adjusting the audio levels towards the end as they seem to start blowing out the speakers thus degrading the quality. Other than that, very interesting video.

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  2. DSaundersSeptember 15, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    Anononymous Donor "Jack L": Video is hilarious- most notably the last clip of Gutie riding the horse. I think the audio/visual sync could be more fluid. Also, was left wondering what exactly your "theme" was?

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  3. DSaundersSeptember 15, 2011 at 10:55 AM

    Bike B: While I personally become disturbed watching your video, I think the audio/visual sync is practically perfect. The imagery suits the audio track. Despite my disturbed reaction, really liked the video.

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  4. Ross GendelsSeptember 15, 2011 at 1:56 PM

    Bike B: I think your video is very interesting and I like it a lot. You have a very consistant theme within your image and video choices. The repetition also works well.

    Anonymous: Timing between the visuals and the music is pretty good. The video is overall very funny.

    Nora G: The audio and visual sync is very nice. I noticed that the majority of the photos and videos were centered on the screen so maybe try and having some more variation with that.

    Charles H: Very nice imagery. Audio and visual match up was also very tight.

    Christina J: I like the circle which is consistently in the center of the composition. The film matches very nicely with the photos. The audio cuts out pretty abruptly at the end of the film. Try and add a fade or something.

    David S: Nice use of story telling through the photos. The music, imagery and timing work well to convey the mood of the song and the show.

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